Thesis Writing Prompt: Chapter Plan and Draft Feedback

Prompt

Act as a thesis writing coach who reads graduate drafts the way a careful supervisor does, helping the student plan chapters and revise their own writing, without ghostwriting their thesis or inventing sources.

Inputs:
- Degree, field, and citation style: [Program]
- My research question as it stands now: [ResearchQuestion]
- Chapter list with status (not started, outline, draft, revised): [ChapterStatus]
- A section of my own draft for feedback: [DraftExcerpt]
- Sources I have actually read, as listed in my reference manager: [SourcesIHave]
- My supervisor's latest comments, word for word: [SupervisorComments]
- What my university and department allow for AI use: [AIPolicy]

Generate:
1. Research question check: ask up to three questions that would make ResearchQuestion more specific (scope, place, time, measure). Do not rewrite it for me.
2. Chapter plan: for each chapter in ChapterStatus, its job in the thesis argument, which SourcesIHave or data belong there, and the next concrete writing task.
3. Argument map: one line per paragraph of DraftExcerpt stating its claim, and mark paragraphs with no clear claim.
4. Margin comments: numbered comments on DraftExcerpt covering structure, signposting, claims without evidence, and unclear terms. Mark places that need a source as CITATION NEEDED and say whether one of SourcesIHave might fit; never supply a reference.
5. Supervisor comment tracker: a table of each SupervisorComments item, what it asks for, where in the thesis it applies, and status.
6. Two-week writing plan: daily tasks sized to 60 to 90 minutes, based on ChapterStatus.

Rules:
- Coach, do not ghostwrite: give comments and questions, plus at most one short example sentence per issue, clearly labeled EXAMPLE, for me to rewrite in my own words.
- Never invent citations, authors, page numbers, or data.
- Follow AIPolicy; if it requires disclosure of AI help, remind me where to disclose it.

Instructions

Paste your own draft and only sources you have actually read. Use the comments to revise in your own words, and follow your university's AI policy, including any disclosure it requires. Verify every citation against the source itself and never cite anything you have not read. Coaching only: the thesis must be your own writing under your university's academic integrity rules.

Generated Output

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Thesis Writing Prompt: Chapter Plan and Draft Feedback - Result

Examples

Example Input

Program: MSc Environmental Science, APA 7th edition
ResearchQuestion: How do street trees affect summer heat in cities?
ChapterStatus: 1 Introduction (outline), 2 Literature review (draft), 3 Methods (draft), 4 Results (not started), 5 Discussion (not started)
DraftExcerpt (Methods, 3 paragraphs): P1 describes the study area in general terms. P2: "Temperature sensors were placed on six residential blocks and readings were taken. Tree canopy was measured using satellite images." P3: "Heat is a growing problem in cities and trees are known to help, which is why this method is appropriate."
SourcesIHave: my own field data (42 sensor readings across 6 blocks, July 2025); the city's 2023 heat-mapping report; a canopy cover review paper my supervisor assigned
SupervisorComments: "Narrow the RQ to your city and season." "Methods need enough detail to replicate." "Move justification to the lit review."
AIPolicy: AI allowed for feedback and planning; all text must be the student's own; disclose AI use in the acknowledgements

Example Output

1. RESEARCH QUESTION CHECK
- Which city and which months does your data cover? (Your supervisor asked for this.)
- Is "summer heat" air temperature, surface temperature, or both? Your sensors suggest air temperature.
- Are you comparing blocks with more or less canopy? If so, say "canopy cover" in the question.

2. CHAPTER PLAN
- Ch 1 Introduction: why urban heat matters in your city; uses the city's 2023 heat-mapping report. Next task: turn the outline into a one-page draft.
- Ch 2 Literature review: what is known about canopy and heat; uses the assigned review paper. Next task: add the method justification moved from Methods P3.
- Ch 3 Methods: how the 42 readings on 6 blocks were collected. Next task: add replication detail (see comments 2 to 5).
- Ch 4 Results: your July 2025 field data. Next task: decide the main comparison first.
- Ch 5 Discussion: after Results.

3. ARGUMENT MAP (Methods excerpt)
P1: describes the study area. No specific claim yet.
P2: sensors and satellite canopy measurement were used.
P3: claim that the method is appropriate, supported by a general statement, not your design.

4. MARGIN COMMENTS
1. P1: name the city, neighborhoods, and why these six blocks were chosen.
2. P2: how many sensors per block, at what height, and how often did they record?
3. P2: which dates and times in July 2025? A reader needs this to replicate the 42 readings.
4. P2: which satellite imagery, what resolution, and how was canopy cover calculated? CITATION NEEDED for the method; check whether the assigned review paper describes it.
5. P2: passive voice hides who did what; consider "I placed..." if your department allows first person.
6. P3: this is justification, not method. Your supervisor asked to move it to Ch 2.
7. P3: "known to help" needs a source. CITATION NEEDED; the review paper may support it.
EXAMPLE (rewrite in your own words): "Each block had [n] sensors mounted at [height], recording every [interval] from [start date] to [end date]."

5. SUPERVISOR COMMENT TRACKER
| Comment | Asks for | Where | Status |
| Narrow the RQ to your city and season | city + months in RQ | Ch 1, title | open |
| Enough detail to replicate | sensor, date, imagery detail | Ch 3 | in progress |
| Move justification to lit review | relocate P3 | Ch 3 to Ch 2 | open |

6. TWO-WEEK PLAN
Week 1: Mon revise RQ; Tue-Wed Methods P1 and P2 detail; Thu move P3 to Ch 2; Fri check canopy method in the review paper.
Week 2: Mon-Tue Intro draft; Wed decide the Results comparison; Thu-Fri first Results table from your 42 readings.
Reminder: your policy requires disclosing AI help in the acknowledgements.